My Cheese tune!!

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#6
think it could be a bit more "hookie" for pop. nice effort still. an maybe the lead synth was a little too prominent, this sort of pop relies more heavily on rhythm and clean simple hooks. also getting lil john to shout "yeah" here and there wouldn't go amiss.

its big, but thats my thoughts if im trying to be constructively critical.
 

Dave Dexcell

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think it could be a bit more "hookie" for pop. nice effort still. an maybe the lead synth was a little too prominent, this sort of pop relies more heavily on rhythm and clean simple hooks. also getting lil john to shout "yeah" here and there wouldn't go amiss.

its big, but thats my thoughts if im trying to be constructively critical.
safe man!

i wish i could get lill jon haha
 

Dave Dexcell

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#11
that was quite sick, got a proper mtv dance vibe to it. not my cup of tea but i recon people would buy this. respect
Nice one man. well i have put it out myself so hopefully it will do well and i can use the money to put out dnb vinyl ;)

safe for the comments i know people are proberly reluctant to reply as its not dnb lol

Big up|!
 
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