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[Ihamitsu]

 

[WhoSayReload?]

I would say just play around more with your levels and your EQing there's some quite harsh and resonant frequencies in there, particularly in the hi hats / shuffle break on the intro and in the tops of the bassline and the riff on the intro. I like the energy to the track and the kick and snare, both sound punchy. The track could do with some switch ups and variation as well.

 

[Ihamitsu]

Thanks you for opinion... I will definetly look at it
Still I think it´s the best track I made 8 months since I started with production with no knowledge and I´m glad for even this kind of sound

 

[maschinistom]

elo! sounding good ihamitsu .. u r well progressing. some of the synth sounds a bit too distorted imo.
I like the drum work though, sounding good. but pls look at the snare, maybe adding a few layers would give it more punch.
good work man !!