My best song yet! (melodic DnB)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by 1Dotlone, May 24, 2012.

  1. 1Dotlone

    1Dotlone New Member

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    Sorry guys, posted in the wrong section.

    Here it is! Feedback appreciated! Guitar coming soon.



    EDIT: Made drums harder, used better snare!
     
    Last edited: May 28, 2012
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    Bump. Tell me how you like it!
     
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    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    I would but you took the track down
     
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    Catsel Well-Known Dismember

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    fort twisted had the best sound....
     
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    spyre sample all the things

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    Epic fail.
     
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    maybe it's an autocorrect issue? guitar = non-dumbass working link...
     
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    Wow huge fail on my part! Edited! Got my copy/paste messed up.
     
  9. spyre

    spyre sample all the things

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    Tune sounds nice man, give the drums some more punch/presence though (y)
     
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    I did think of that, I didn't want them to be too overpowering though. I may turn them up a little though, and use a better snare.
     
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    dnb is all about big drums! (well, not all tunes...) but yes, bigger drums make this a bigger tune, turn them up, maybe more compression. good sounds though.

    ---------- Post added at 10:56 ---------- Previous post was at 10:55 ----------

    yeah, better snare is a good idea i think. sounds a bit like a john b tune or something.
     
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    Thank you msmith! I love john b so that's a great compliment!

    Edit: I remade the drums a bit.
     
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    Nice one man :) I am actually really liking the happy little melody and actual synth sound. It has a really cool trance sound to it