I know we've got some Hip Hop heads on here. I recorded some lyrics for the first time ever today, can anyone critique me? "Flanneur; flar-nur, noun; 1. One who strolls about aimlessly; a lounger; a loafer. Those in persuit of the disinterested, artistically inclined wanderer of the city, of what they call 'city watching'. Internet debut for my hangover choked voicebox. Yes, I know my right eye half closes when I'm hanging. Does anyone know if that 'Life in the beast so we all gotta break a bit' bar is from someone else? It slipped in an I wasn't sure. Jam Baxter or Brotherman maybe?" PS: Don't show that to anyone. It's kind of a secret.