my attempt at vocal liquid style....thoughts?

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  1. krease

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    snares way too loud man (maybe change it?), drums need more layers, the sound is way too repetetive as well? maybe add some more notes in as it gets boring quickly. vocals are alright, one is a lot louder than the other?

    Keep it up though man
     
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    Yeah, I'll agree that it sounds good but gets repetitive. Maybe don't have that same melody running through the whole tune.
    Pretty nice tho. The vocal works.
     
  4. krease

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    cheers for teh feedback guys
     
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    the garagy break you used in there is overly used atm, called mystery or something, ive used it alot in my work, its getting a bit common now.

    would be good if turned the snare down a bit. also try n change up the melody or drums a bit.

    wht youve done with the vocal sample works well, and its sounding tight, just needs a few tweeks and some variation!!
     
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    sounds tight tho, amazing how well your production has come on
     
  7. krease

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    cheers pimp big ups bro

    are u refering to the break in the intro? its the break from dark soldier, bt yea i know wat ure sayin.

    cheers for the support!