My 2nd Tune - Yenraw - The dark

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  1. warney_dcfc

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    fucking hell... mate i'm well impressed for 1 month! really wasn't expecting much...

    if you ask me the intro was too long, could probably do with being 32 bars rather than 64 or just add something more interesting to stop it dragging on.

    Drums are well good for a begginer, keep it up! i would suggest looking into the technicals of mixing down and polishing off a track, as this tune will greatfully benefit from it! maybe even add a sublte break to it, although the shuffle you have in the hats gives the beat quite a nice groove anyway.