My 1st D'n'B track. Comments please! :)

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  1. Roman Levin

    Roman Levin New Member

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    hello! i'm new here, and here's my first drum'n'bass track.
     
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  2. Neomind

    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    Sounding very tight to be honest... but please you should interact more with people on the forum before just posting your songs :)

    Welcome!
     
  3. Roman Levin

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    sure! thx for comment! ;)
     
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    Cor Member

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    sounds pretty tight!
     
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    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    its very nice, specially for a first tune. keep at it!
     
  6. Roman Levin

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    thanks! it's nice to get a positive feedback! :)
     
  7. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    You have talent. What are producing on?
     
  8. Roman Levin

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    thank u for your kind words! :) i'm using Cubase5.
     
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    Catsel Well-Known Dismember

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    nice one Roman.. excellente for first tune..

    make sumthin more dirty next time ;)
     
  10. Roman Levin

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    oh thank u! :) it's not my first tune, it's my first d'n'b tune.. i used to produce downtempo stuff earlier.
     
  11. equilibrium

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    you create a classic vibe in this tune. would love to hear those hats cleaned up and a bit tighter. they play with the ride nicely. if you used fewer notes in the piano and had more reverb on it i think it would sound better a bit louder if it didn't stand out too much.

    just good vibes here, nice.
     
  12. Roman Levin

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    glad u like it! i think i'll do some fixes later & put the track for free download. :)

    and..question to everyone - is the sub bass ok? i've changed it for a few times,but i got quite poorly treated studio room and can't understand what's wrong with it.
     
  13. spyre

    spyre sample all the things

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    I think it's awesome, love the vibe. Not much I would change tbh, try making some more edits to the drums (like in the intro just keep adding parts to make up the main break). The bass sounds good to me but I use headphones and not speakers.
     
  14. Roman Levin

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    thanx mate! :) will do something with the drums.
     
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    Altodnb. AltoDnB

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    Yea man this is really good for a first dnb tune, how long you been producing for?
     
  16. Roman Levin

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    thx! oh.. it's about 10 yrs or something.. :)
     
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    It's very nice for the first dnb tune and I'd have to agree with equilibrium's thought about piano notes hitting too frequently at some parts of the song. You should look into that. :)
     
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    thank u :) i'll do some editing as soon,as i fix my PC..
     
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    I'd love to hear it in Need for speed. Such a nice atmosphere tho
     
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    thanx for feedback! ;)