you create a classic vibe in this tune. would love to hear those hats cleaned up and a bit tighter. they play with the ride nicely. if you used fewer notes in the piano and had more reverb on it i think it would sound better a bit louder if it didn't stand out too much.
I think it's awesome, love the vibe. Not much I would change tbh, try making some more edits to the drums (like in the intro just keep adding parts to make up the main break). The bass sounds good to me but I use headphones and not speakers.