Muta - Danger (Finished) (dark)

[Muta]

Hiya'll

New finished track :3

http://soundcloud.com/mutadnb/danger

Feedback on ANY aspect is welcomed ^^
(mixdown? Drums? bass/bassline? etc etc etc)

I hope you guys'll like it :3

 

[Neomind]

get ready for some criticism! here I go...
first of all, why do you call this dark? yep it has some dark tones and so on but, in my opinion this is tech step, rolling drums and a wobbly filter modulated reese.
You still need a lot of improvenet in what synths reffers to. Drums are acceptable thought, but still need some more love to put here and there.
The song after 4 bars in each drop gets boring, no changes, this won't keep any listener interested on listening and trying to guess "what's gonna happen in the next 4 bars?".

Hope this feedback is usefull to you and don't get angry man! Just my opinion.

 

[T Leaf]

yeh im sort of with neo on this one mate, dont get me wrong nice idea: try resampling the synths after bouncing it - will hardwrite the lfo modulations to each pitch/note change.
but good composition and the 3:27 bass is pretty nice mate. keep working on this one