Muta - Danger (Finished) (dark)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Muta, Apr 22, 2010.

  1. Muta

    Muta Hologram

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    Hiya'll

    New finished track :3

    http://soundcloud.com/mutadnb/danger

    Feedback on ANY aspect is welcomed ^^
    (mixdown? Drums? bass/bassline? etc etc etc)

    I hope you guys'll like it :3
     
  2. Neomind

    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    get ready for some criticism! here I go...
    first of all, why do you call this dark? yep it has some dark tones and so on but, in my opinion this is tech step, rolling drums and a wobbly filter modulated reese.
    You still need a lot of improvenet in what synths reffers to. Drums are acceptable thought, but still need some more love to put here and there.
    The song after 4 bars in each drop gets boring, no changes, this won't keep any listener interested on listening and trying to guess "what's gonna happen in the next 4 bars?".

    Hope this feedback is usefull to you and don't get angry man! Just my opinion.
     
  3. T Leaf

    T Leaf Neighbourhood Sickhead

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    yeh im sort of with neo on this one mate, dont get me wrong nice idea: try resampling the synths after bouncing it - will hardwrite the lfo modulations to each pitch/note change.
    but good composition and the 3:27 bass is pretty nice mate. keep working on this one