listening... theres a really odd bit of silence where youve chopped up the speech sample at the beginning, id lay some other noise even if its jst fuzz under the whole thing to make it feel more natural.
quite feeling the drums in the intro, not really feeling the bass synth to be honest, but thats just personal preference i guess.
could maybe do with having a quiet shaker layed over the drums? imo
its a bit repetetive too imo.... lots of good ideas here, drum programming is good everything else could do with a bit of variation imo.