Music I've made so far

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Petey Pate, Jun 8, 2009.

  1. Petey Pate

    Petey Pate New Member

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    Hey all, I would really appreciate some feedback on the music that I've made so far.

    http://www.7161.com/css_artist.cfm?user=16242

    Criticism welcomed, only two tracks are really drum & bass, being "JUNGLE" and "Still Rollin'".
     
  2. fr00tyfr3sh

    fr00tyfr3sh Member

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    The track Jungle is really screwed up mate, i wasn't feeling the track at all :eek:

    Still rolling definitely needs a hardek kick and snare to begin with. U got a lot of work cut out for you man, but its a start. U use FL Studio right?
     
  3. Petey Pate

    Petey Pate New Member

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    Yeah I do use FL Studio, thanks for your comments :)
     
  4. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    2 Posts ffs.
    No feedback for you.
     
  5. dolphinslovejaz

    dolphinslovejaz New Member

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    Re:Jungle
    You went massively overkill on the whole pitching up and down your snares thing man. It just felt like too much to me and it all felt very unessesary. Also, I felt there were way too many samples to give it any coherant feel. This could be a good track I think, if you're willing to cut it down and refine your ideas but as it stands it feels a bit congealed