Mr.Rius - Amplitude / First DnB Tune gimme some feeedback

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Mr.Rius, Aug 30, 2009.

  1. Mr.Rius

    Mr.Rius New Member

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    SO here it is my first DnB tune

    http://soundcloud.com/mr-rius/mr-rius-amplitude


    I´ve been producing computer stuff for some time but mainly hiphop and minimal/house stuff.
    I´d be happy about some feedback :)
    if it´s positiv it´s good for my ego
    if it´s negativ it´s good for my music :p

    thx in advance
    mr.rius
     
  2. msmith222

    msmith222 redbeard

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    ego: i think this sounds very good. while not my style of drum and bass, it sounds balanced and smooth

    music: the drums need to hit harder for me
     
  3. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    I like the way you've used a variety of samples/sounds. Really enjoyed that. Not sure if the drums were quite up to it, but then I'm not sure if you're going for a standard dnb sound.
    Nice one.
     
  4. Busdriver

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    Hey Buddy,

    Great one. I like it.

    To criticize a bit; i'd say:

    Drums don't cut enough through the mix (does it remind something to you? :))
    And i think your lead duck too quickly at aproximately 3:00

    After that, i really like the feeling.

    Kee on going
     
  5. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    Neat intro... I LOVE the horn... is that a sample or did you play it/find someone to play it???


    WHOOO... really like this drop!
    That bell on the brkdwn at 2:55 is lush.


    Track sounds great... Prod is nice and crisp... not sure if the tune is Limited or not... if you're interested in a free Master: let me know, I'd love to Limit this for you.




    :jam: