MR Mephisto

Discussion in 'Production' started by Barnzee, Feb 8, 2008.

  1. Barnzee

    Barnzee OmniaInNumerisSitaSunt

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    Got a new tune up on the myspace, im new to this and this is my second tune, so any help and criticism is welcomed:) Thanks guys.


    www.myspace.com/drumandbarnzee
     
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    I'll av a listen mate
     
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    when i go on your myspace it goes all weird and i can't add ya n shit and there is no player so i can't av a listen matey
     
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    Barnzee OmniaInNumerisSitaSunt

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    Serious? it works fine for me on the link i placed in the first post... cheers for trying anyways:S
     
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    Lol that ok mate, i will keep tryin matey
     
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    I:coffee: really need the feedback...
     
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    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    Hello mate. Just had a listen to your new tune. Mr Mephisto.
    It certainly is unique mate and hats off to you for not following the general crowd. I do have some ideas that might be worth considering. The tune starts pretty much full on. It would be better to build up to the bass, which is the main feature of your tune. It is more of a progressive type dnb and slightly industrial. Yours seems to linger in the middle of those two themes. If you wanna keep it progressive then i suggest you remove a lot of the noise from the track and layer the sounds so they kick in independantly, giving the tune some structure and build up. If you were going for the industrial, Matrix (gritty) type tune, Maybe make it really raw with some very detuned distortion guitar sounds. At the moment it reminds me a little of an intro to a marilyn manson tune.
    Stick at it mate. Hope the advice has helped.
    PEACE!
     
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    hahha, marilyn manson wasnt what i was going for. Cheers mate, its only my second tune, and your constructive points are appreciated :)