Mr.Gem - Hyperspeed

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Mr.Gem, Jul 13, 2009.

  1. Mr.Gem

    Mr.Gem Member

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    http://www.reverbnation.com/mrgem

    The first time i've uploaded a song of mine so the feedback would be very helpfull.

    I need to do a few things to it like add more of a bassline and sort the drums out but apart from that im fairly happy with it.

    All feedback welcome..

    Cheers
     
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  2. T Leaf

    T Leaf Neighbourhood Sickhead

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    hmm, i really like that controlled noise at the start man, the 7th is nice too. but yeh the drums seem too quiet in the mix for my liking. more of this one please. the start is really strong, but it loses its energy when as i didnt get a big drop where the drums were on par with the intro.

    let me know when you finish this cos its got the right stuff to be sick.
     
  3. Mr.Gem

    Mr.Gem Member

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    Thanks alot for the reply man.

    Ill definatly be working on this one more, I'll try fixing it up and have a full track posted soon. Will also be posting some other tracks in a bit.
     
  4. Mr.Gem

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    Guys just uploaded another song and should have some more coming. So feel free to comment on them aswel, much appreciated.
     
  5. Fratanize

    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    hello mate.
    Some good ideas in the intro. Not sure about the clappy snare. Drums do need to more prominent in the mix. If you are struggling to get volume on them without clipping the red, lower the volumes of the other channels to allow headroom for the bass and drums.
    peace
     
  6. chromey

    chromey a.k.a Impact

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    Interesting track.
    Pad and bass worked really well.. structure/arrangement could do with some spit and polish
    Drums are definately the weak point.

    Great first upload though! Looking forward to the finished effort!
     
  7. *State

    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    actually sounds good for someone who has just started, keep at this mate you got good ideas with this track.