Mr Cut New Tune: Stones

[mistercut]

Hey folks, new around here, looking for some feedback on a tune I'm trying to write.

http://soundcloud.com/stick/stones

Love some comments on structure/overall feel/production/whatever

TIA

 

[mistercut]

Anyone?

 

[Klarc]

Yo
Had a listen, its got a nice chilled vibe to it. The drums are done well, nice kick and rhythm. In my opinion the vocals could do with a bit less repetition or some sort of slowly automated effect.
But none the less, a beautiful tune.

 

[mistercut]

Thanks for the feedback. I'm back with version 2. Any more for any more?

http://soundcloud.com/stick/stones-version-2-2

 

[Neatsu]

Yeah, I've listened to the revised version and the remix sounds good bro The vocals fit into the composition quite well, maybe you could use some sort of ambient/echo effect on them to enhance how they sound. The mixdown is good and you could introduce right after it an additional melody/pad/string to give it a little boost. Overall a beautiful remix

 

[mistercut]

If you're not sick of the sound of it, I've posted a final version

http://soundcloud.com/stick/mr-cut-stones