Fair enough, can see you've given others feedback so I thought I would have a listen and give you some
(though you've only waited 4 hours, I'm sure others will come and give you feedback soon
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I'd work on the intro a little, you kinda launch straight into it whereas I'd take a bit more from your drop and think about how a DJ is going to mix into your track - its a bit full on imo. After the drop you got some real energy going, its good ! Something doesn't sit right with me between the bass and the drums, they clash a little (not much, but think about placement here or some gentle side chaining?). The 2nd drop is too long imo (and should be your intro !). Bit more variation after the second drop wouldn't go amiss, feels a bit copy and paste to me.
Hope that helps