More practice, just bounced this to audio for comments. thanks

[PeriodicDisturbance]

Some vocals with a delay effect so far. think i need some more variation here. snare sounds ok maybe too wet and kind of repetitive. Who has some tips on pitching up and down snares and playing with velocity to get some variation. sometimes i feel like my beat comes out flat in the mix. let me know people. thank you

https://soundcloud.com/michael-goetz-975677037%2Ftues16

 

[maschinistom]

Kinda neuro liquid.. like it a lot. Vox sound excellent... bass, synth good. Pls look at the snare .. not fitting well imo. I like the effects on the breaks and drums (I agree they are too wet at times) interesting atmo. Maybe too many elements, better to cut down? Good work this one!