Moonman - Button (dubstep)

[hardmode]

hi, made my first track what you think about it? Already see one part what i could make a bit diffrent but well i'll do that later

https://soundcloud.com/itsmoonman%2Fmoonman-button

 

[Fishy:)]

I would lose those vocal samples and not stop the bass all the time like that.. Its not bad for a first time

 

[djdevz]

not bad for ur 1st track, better than my 1st attempt lol..
bit repetitive for me though...n i think ur kicks n snares need 2 be more punchier and present in ur mix...n add some more percussion to give a groove to the song
also for the build up of the 1st drop, when u chop n repeat the vox, it doesnt sound good in the order youve done it imo..maybe try n separate the words and put them in time to ur beat.