Monolithix-Lower Cities {Liquid/Neuro/DnB} Demo

[JoErOe]

Here is a demo version of my latest track Ive been working on. A hybrid between some liquid vibes and neurofunk flavor.
Any feedback is always welcome!!!

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fchemical-sounds%2Flower-cities

 

[smoothassilk]

Has potential maybe.

I think the biggest thing letting the track down is the drums. The kick doesn't really cut through very well and there are too many kicks and snares in the pattern. I think you should make some of the kicks and snares 'ghost notes' by playing them at half volume.

Also I think there should be a bigger contrast between the neuro and liquid sections. I would have the liquid sections in a major key 3 st up from the neuro section in a minor key for contrast.

 

[ceckster]

Its a good idea. But I think the neuro bass sequence is a bit weak. I would be dope if you did out some more time on that part!