MNTY - Hurricane (Pendulum influenced drums/Summery style piano)

smoothassilk

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Well,
I think it could be good, but
a) it's a bit cheesy. Some people do like cheesy stuff, so that probably doesn't matter too much overall.
b) The notes of the vocal clash quite a lot with the piano chords. This does matter a lot, because it ruins the whole track.
If you tell me what notes the vocal is and what the piano chords are I can tell you where you went wrong.
 

mnty

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Oh wow I didn't realise!

The piano chords are E Fshp G A E Fshp G B A (i think) If you were to play single notes along with the piano they would be E Fshp G A B A, E Fshp G B A

My knowledge on chords are poor, as you have probably just worked out...

Not sure about the vocal :/

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Actually, the vocal is in Dshp so I need to just shift them up 1 semitone right?
 

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Actually, the vocal is in Dshp so I need to just shift them up 1 semitone right?
Should be ok if you shift up one semitone. It's not always the case but I think it should be fine this time

The piano chords are E Fshp G A E Fshp G B A (i think) If you were to play single notes along with the piano they would be E Fshp G A B A, E Fshp G B A
Not sure entirely what you mean... minor or major for each chord?
Sounds ok to me so probably it's fine once you've shifted up the vocal.
 
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