hmmm, i'd keep the drums, maybe stick a break behind them for the variation, keep the bass, get rid of the organ thing thats right at the very start, keep the piano roll bits but not the chords after, get some vocal samples and (just my opinion) rework the track with those 3 elements... if u wanna keep on the path its on, id have to say to the drop is too wierd and the organ thing still wouldnt work for me, it also seems one of ur hats or even a ghost snare is panned to the left?
anyway, hope any of that helps, its quite late so can't rly listen with my sub on etc