Mine new drum and bass maybe neuro tune :)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by risakczex, Sep 22, 2012.

  1. risakczex

    risakczex Member

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    hi guys :) today is nice day to release new drum and bass track :p i just want to share with you my new track
    if you remember me and my Release your spirit track this is something very different... :D



    comment it and rate :))

    thanks LyRyck :)
     
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    It's sounding good I like the vocal i think you can widen it a bit or duplicate the track a few times with different effects on each one for some variation/beef up the sound, Drums are sounding a bit weak I think its mixed wrong but I'm using headphones.
    Instruments sound good i like the atmosphere but i think you should really work on clarity. I'm liking the overall idea though, love to hear the finished mix. Check out my tracks and give feedback please :D
     
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    I like the ideas in this one, kind of cool track, sweet vibes. I agree pretty much with pattycake here.

    You need to work on getting rid of the muddiness, especially in the intro / buildup part. EQ the different elements to give them each one a certain position in the frequency spectrum, that helps a lot when you get the hang of it!
     
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    Thanks guys :)) this words makes me satisfied :) i will work on it when i get time :) and yes i am only begginer thats why its mixed wrong ://
    i am still learning :)
    i will repair it in complete version :p
     
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    pretty good. you build up so nicely with synths and then they disappear, heavier drums and more layers would feel right in the drop

    might play with the vocal and have it do something like:

    everybody goes to hollywood they want to make it in the neighborhood
    repeat

    then

    everybody goes to hollywood (delay added on hollywood)
    4 bars
    repeat

    for an end chorus, layered up with some strings
     
  6. risakczex

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    thanks man :)) i just completed this track i will be uploading it tomorow its mastered mixdown i think now its all right :)

    this old version sucks than this new ! :)

    i added hollywood and delayed it for 3 bars at end ... but its cool :p