Mentor & Moore new track feedback please

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  1. Mentor & Moore

    Mentor & Moore Member

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    Hey everyone!

    I am working on my latest track but I'm just not sure if he is good enough.
    Can anyone help me? :)
    Any feedback would be much appreciated!!


    SoundCloud link:

    https://soundcloud.com/mentormoore/
    chemical-rushes-t6/s-5xxy3

    (I don't know why but I couldn't post the full private link. Just copy the 2 parts of the link and paste them and you should be able to listen to my track :) )

    Mentor & Moore
     
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    Skylarkdnb New Member

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    Yo,
    So yeah, dude, your drums sounds off I'm sorry but yeah haha, you should replace kick and snare right now
    And work more and the drum overall.
    The entire thing need more punch, a side chain kick snare would work to give space and punch

    Beside that It's not really my kind of D&B but I can see something pple might like in there

    Keep going
     
  3. maschinistom

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    hi, he is right, drums need some work.
    is this kind of a remix from you? i heard the melody lines before .. otherwise, nice track, like it !

    PS: i would add some effects to the melody lines as well to spice them up.
    for example in this track below, i used THE FINGER from Tim Exile for this.
     
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  4. Mentor & Moore

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    Hey thank you very much!! I'll make sure to change the drums :D
     
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    Thank you very much!! I'll make sure to change the drums and add some effects to the melody! :D
     
  6. MentalFrame

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    Yea, as said before. But nice work though
     
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    Thanks mate!!
     
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    hi again .. about the melodies: are these entirely from you -- or are you remixing someone? I think i heard most of the melody lines before .. can't remember where. I admit .. hard to do completely new stuff these days with millions of tracks produced in the past 30 years .. who gives a sh.. ? :D
     
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    Hi! Yeah I made it my self not with the intensity of making a remix :/ Maybe I should make some changes to the melody as well ;D Thanks for the comment mate!
     
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    Hey guys back again!!! I did some adjustments to my track, Chemical Rushes.
    I you can is it possible to listen to it one more time? ^^

    Would be much appreciated!

    Thank you!!

    ( again I don't know why but I had to post the private link in 2 parts. Just cope the 2 pieces back together and you're good to go :) sorry!)

    https://soundcloud.com/mentormoore/
    chemical-rushes/s-O4QB5