Menosance - Killing Time (very very experimental)

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  1. Menosance

    Menosance aka OSOI

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    Hi guys,

    I hope you are all well. Last night, I created and finished this track. It is a bit experimental (even for my style) and I would like to know how people feel about its vibe and its mixing of course. For once I know to which label a track of mine shall go to.

    Menosance - Killing Time
    https://soundcloud.com/menosance/killing-time/s-6269Q

    Thanks, Much Love,
    Menosance :)

    Check below for the latest version of this :)
     
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    I really like the drop. I'm not as sure the intro fits in; maybe it could use just a touch more energy, some filtered voices from the drop, etc. But yes, once things get moving it's pretty engaging.

    I do wonder if you could add a lead or vocal samples or something. I like the breakdown.

    While I'd consider working on it more, it's a very interesting tune with a great vibe.
     
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    Thanks kdk. Did you find it catchy and engaging with lead though?? :)
     
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    Maybe a bit repetitive, I wonder if you could add some background FX-y sounds or something.

    If you know a little music theory, a chord change every 4-8 bars might be nice. Do you know anything about chords and stuff?

    I would say good work in progress, but needs a little bit more.
     
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    Yes, that was great... I just wanted something happening in the very upper register, I think...
     
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    Anyone?? Thanks :)
     
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    bit too experimental for me but its sounding pretty good. i would turn that lead down a bit, maybe add some filters to it to add a bit of variation. could try a few sweeping notches as it progresses or something!
     
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    Thanks for the comments. Shall be having 1 final go at it maybe tonight.
     
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    Would love more ideas on this one. Thank you :)