Melodic dnb with a dash of sub bass

[Altered Terrane]

not my style of dnb but very creative non the less. the drum beat / pattern feels akward to me. lots of good ideas but i feel it could use work on the arrangement

ok thanks dude, will consider this!

 

[Altered Terrane]

I was gonna say, aside from the sub-bass maybe eq'ing a few things to cover the mid-range a bit better? I'm getting bass and treble but a bit of a gap in the middle.
I would pop some fills in the drum pattern as well every couple of 16 bars.
STRONG ideas though in the composition

i'll have a look after the weekend to see if i can also spot the gap! thanks for letting me know man!

man with so much feedback i can hardly go wrong! thanks everyone!!

 

[Altered Terrane]

might not interest anyone here, but looks like i wont be able to re-work this. laptop with all files from the song was stolen....
so yay for that

 

[CTJake]

might not interest anyone here, but looks like i wont be able to re-work this. laptop with all files from the song was stolen....
so yay for that

Motherf**kers

 

[Altered Terrane]

Motherf**kers

yea man, fucking sucks... broke into my car stealing all the shit that was in there including my laptop.
PSA: dont leave your valuables in your car people!