I would probably try to put a bass in there that hits the low-mid frequencies, not just a subbass. On shitty speakers you can only hear the piano noise and drums so it sounds really empty. 0:50-1:20 sounds much better because of the pad. I think the high end percussion could be slightly louder as well. A melody or an acapella thrown on there would add to the track nicely too I think. Just my 2 cents.
