hi, no a big fan of marshmello. please look at the drums in the intro, maybe you can delete some hits to get a clearer rhythm.
after that it's nicely evolving and rising. from around 1:30 the rhythm seems much better than in the intro, but it it appears later on again.
please look at EQing, the is quite a bit muddiness in the lower mid range and bass. look at 200hz and 500hz esp. otherwise, good work!