MARLOK - UNTITLED

[MARKLAR]

bored today made this in bout 2 hours or so
still got work to do on it
all feedback is good

 

[Nucleoid]

Perhaps refine the drums a little. EQ/Compresswise.
And add a break!
Nice start though

 

[neddez]

yeah the break sounds like its coming from a different environment, doesnt fit

 

[Mr Fletch]

Lovin those industrial sounds in the intro, wish they were a bit more dominant! Mix sounds pretty off this end mate, sounds really over compressed??

 

[MARKLAR]

cheers for feedback
yea i may have over compressed some bits but im trying out a new way to mixdown tunes ill get it sounding right soon

 

[subprime]

Nice synth at 2:16. Good elements going on, feel like it needs something more tho

 

[that_fred_guy]

really liking the piano work and the synth, basically everything apart from the drums. i'd change the drums a lot, especially the snare and the break. might even work really nicely as a half-time sort of thing

 

[MARKLAR]

cheers guys
i changed the drums last night sounds alot better still got some bits to do but ill upload newer version sometime this week

 

[underspawn]

I agree with the fred guy. Rly pleasant tune but the drums don't fit at all imo. It would sound better with lighter kick and snare and with some classic breaks i think.

 

[MARKLAR]

cheers man
thats pretty much what im workin on it now
also got rid of the harder bit at the end will keep that for something else

 

[Manu Forti]

as previous posters have said it needs some work and drums dont seem to fit. although some nice chilled melodies in there nice to see the finished product

 

[tdmrecords]

Hi i represent TDM Records

could you email me please on demo@tdmrecords.co.uk

Steve @ TDM

 

[parsons19]

Percussion seems alright to me? Not perfect and some work could be done but doesn't seem that bad! Dunno if you added an updated version?

Like the musical bits and things Pretty good for about two hours work but it seems a bit rough round the edges mate. Keep working on this one though!

Not going to lie, not too keen on the last bass kinda sound, kinda takes away from the chilled atmoshere of the rest of the tune