MARLOK - THE END

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MARKLAR, Apr 29, 2011.

  1. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    new tune i started yesterday pretty happy with it now
    all feedback is good cheers
     
  2. luciduk

    luciduk Active Member

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    nice tune man, bass is dutty, seems like maybe over all it could have more low end to it possibly jus for example like the kick drum is very treble and not much low end?? nice wun
     
  3. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers mate
    ill get back on it an add some lowend

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  4. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Ez,
    Nice tune mate,
    Like the bassline
    drums are ok
    I think it could benefit with some
    more shake factor,
    more hihats for my taste
    Like it.
    Cheers,.
     
  6. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers guys
     
  7. Carlo lepore

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    mmm very nice track
     
  8. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers mate
     
  9. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    the drum sound is good and the bass sound is good too. good start but it needs a lot of work now, variety like fills, new parts, more elements, breakdown, etc.
     
  10. Neatsu

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    Cheers bro! Dirty track, like it a lot :) I agree with logikz that the tune could benefit a lot from variations on almost all of the composition levels, this will make it a lot doper. Big ups!
     
  11. Phat_Sam

    Phat_Sam Well-Known Member

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    More sub and low end on the kicks.

    I think the mid & hi on the bass might be a little too loud in the mix.. in fact the mids and hi end in general is a little too loud.

    So more low less hi.

    Bassline is sick!
     
  12. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers guys
     
  13. thefunnyfarm

    thefunnyfarm Xx.Amsy.xX

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    Nice one :D love it :banana:
     
  14. richie_stix

    richie_stix gomby plz

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    i agree, more sub bass and more oomph on the kicks... over all a good tune, but just needs those liccle bits of majic to spice it up ;)
     
  15. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers for checking
     
  16. miszt

    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    very nice, agree on the precussion needing a little more, just to push the energy a bit, great stuff so far
     
  17. Fishy:)

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    Nice bass, but the track doesent really catch my attention