MARLOK - SONAR [JUMP UP]

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MARKLAR, Mar 31, 2011.

  1. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    aint made a jump up tune for a wile now so i made this
    was hard to come up with anything had jump up writers block.lol
    quite happy with it so far all feedback is good
    cheers
     
  2. st420

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    cant listen on good speakers atm mate but sounds really nice, really like the first bass hit on the drop. will definitely have a listen again when im home
     
  3. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    not bad.
    snare seems harsh, and the atmosphere is good, but doesnt work so well havin it on the main dorp, maybe leave that for the parts closer to the breakdown
     
  4. dnblov3r

    dnblov3r Meow?

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    Really nice.. I like it :) !
     
  5. Phat_Sam

    Phat_Sam Well-Known Member

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    Yes Marlok! Diggin this one mate! Try and put a little more high end in the bass though.. it needs some more definition. And yeah... leave the atmospheric sonar stuff out of the drop until you're about to go into the second breakdown.

    Sound top bro. You still on Reason 4?
     
  6. richie_stix

    richie_stix gomby plz

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    yes breadbin... been waiting for some marklar jampap for tiiiime, and boom! cant really fault it technically, except maybe the vox before the drop and at 32 bars after the drop is a bit quiet?

    really diggin all the funky fx and the like, so fuuuuuuck you for being better than me!

    biggles and braps
     
  7. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers guys ill see what i can do bout the snare think i upped the high end before i exported for some reason ill get back on that.
    an ill try add some more high end on the bass too
    im still on reason 4 sam dont wanna change!lol
     
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    Phat_Sam Well-Known Member

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    Haha. Na reason is a beast mate. If it aint broke dont fix it.

    I think the snare is fine mate. It's not too loud on my Krks anyway
     
  9. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    nice im on shitty surround sound so i dont no eitherway!lol
    made alot of this thru in ear shitty headphones at like 5 in the morning aswell!haha
     
  10. Fishy:)

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    Sounding good man:)
     
  11. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers man

    ---------- Post added at 20:50 ---------- Previous post was at 20:19 ----------

    oh an richie im not better than you by any means i just have more time to be makin tunes dont av a job rite now so this is all im kinda doing!lol
    ur tunes are still sick recon we need a collab at some point
     
  12. J-Rex

    J-Rex soundcloud.com/j-rex

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    nice bass sounds but its lacking in the drum department imo, needs more energy and more fills at the end of every 8/16 to give it more interest, everything else is sounding good though
     
  13. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers mate ill see what i can do bout fillin in the drums
     
  14. Thin and crispy

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    ur kick feels a little over compressed imo, other than that its sounding big! could use a bit of shuffle on the high end to give it some pace maybe, the break it sounds like you have HP'd in there isnt rly coming thru.
     
  15. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers mate ill see what i can do
     
  16. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Will take a listen to this when I get home in a bit mate....
     
  17. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Bass sounds really good man. Tight.
     
  18. miszt

    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    great sound! agree on the precussion, needs more beef, i think theres a few freqz from your other sounds that are muddying things up and pulling the precussion back into the mix, coz the precussion sounds pretty tight, its just not quite in the right place in the mix
     
  19. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers for checking
     
  20. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Just got round to listening to this.

    I like it but it feels like it's missing something, but I cant put my finger on it? Could be the beats feel a little empty....I dunno....

    I like it though, just think it needs fattening up here and there!