MARLOK - PAPERCUT

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MARKLAR, Jun 9, 2011.

  1. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    started this bout an hour ago out of my last tunes project file so its got same drums but different arrangement an the tune on the whole has a different feel
    kind of prefer this one now.lol
    all feedback is good
    cheers
     
  2. dj cluster

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    Nice track, there's a glitch at 0.24 and for all the song wich reminds me T1000, very cool. But I think this this sound is a lil too loud in the mix.
    Nice one!!!
     
  3. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers mate ill try an sort that level out
     
  4. Phat_Sam

    Phat_Sam Well-Known Member

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    Yeah mate! Likin the main bass synth. GRIM!

    Snare sounds a little weak in the low ends.

    Sounds a little muddy in the mid range in terms of mix down but it's not distracting.

    Lookin forward to see where you take this.
     
  5. LegionVI

    LegionVI The Living Tempest

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    The intro is pretty sick. The overall mix is pretty spare...if you want to keep the bass the focus, and still have it filled up, an ambient sound would help alot. =)
     
  6. MARKLAR

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    cheers for checkin
     
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    underspawn Headz Roll

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    Awesome intro and bassline !
     
  8. Sid Fidla James

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    Wicked tune man. Would like main bass louder and lo's all bringing up a touch.
    Good stuff though man, dig the sounds and the flow. :)
     
  9. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers guys
     
  10. J-Rex

    J-Rex soundcloud.com/j-rex

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    niiice man, that high pitched synth reminds me of the sound from it/menace by majistrate
     
  11. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers mate
    the sound may well be the sound from that menace tune its from a sample pack!lol
     
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    posted a timed comment :)

    the second drop is quality! it's so sick, when you gunna turn on the download tab? ;)
     
  13. Neatsu

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    Loving the bass and the second drop man, quality!
     
  14. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers for checkin