MARLOK - I MISS YOU

[MARKLAR]

https://soundcloud.com/marlok%2Fi-miss-you

new bit
feedback thank you please

 

[miszt]

mixdown is a bit wonky, but vibes are wikid, great melodies and sounds, nice percussion work, things need to be punchier tho, nice man, like this!

 

[logikz]

best i heard from you so far, great tune. great drums they are really original.

 

[MARKLAR]

cheers guys
which element of the mixdown was wonkiest?lol

 

[miszt]

just needs careful tweeking, everything is pretty clear, except the midrange (eq a bit more), long-synth/pads are a little overpowering, and i recon u can get more sub in there, and more punch on the snare, a bit more sparkle in the top end too (10khz +3-6db shelf might do it, or maybe just on the hats/snare, see what works)

 

[MARKLAR]

cool man ill av a go at that today

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[Deleted member 23164]

love it bra

this new style u got is nice

maybe try it with one less beat. moar simplez. deep.

 

[Life1989]

its really nice track, great atmosphere in it...

 

[MARKLAR]

cheers guys

 

[djdevz]

i like the percussion man! grooving well with the track, i think miszt has a point about some parts of the mixdown tho..a bit of tweaking here and there will make it sound a lot crisper and neater..e.g at 1:32 when the new synth comes in, it sounds like its clashin a lil.
other than that tho it sounds really pleasant..nice tune mate.

 

[MARKLAR]

cheers mate ill see wat i can do

 

[boobjunkie]

real nice man

 

[hyperd4eva]

sounds great to the untrained ear. Id buy it!

 

[miszt]

check ur eq between 180-400hz across all your sounds, i recon theres quite a few rez spikes u can take out that will really help clean the mix up, still lovin the vibes anyways!

 

[MARKLAR]

cheers guys im still workin on the mixdown for this
the version up was basicly just a draft of the idea if u get me

 

[3rd degree]

Yeah, liking this. Like the vocal. I agree, you need a little bit more sub low for the punchiness on the drop and maybe layer another snare for a bit more bite. Sounding good though, man. I'm following ya (-EVADE-). Love your profile pic also haha!

 

[MARKLAR]

cheers mate

 

[Thin and crispy]

Realy feeling this mate but i think u have too much reverb on your instruments in the intro... your drums and sub sound fine to me, possibly a tad (just a tad) more umph on the sub! but thats all. Good work man

 

[MARKLAR]

cheers mate