MARLOK - I MISS YOU

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  1. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    new bit
    feedback thank you please
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  2. miszt

    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    mixdown is a bit wonky, but vibes are wikid, great melodies and sounds, nice percussion work, things need to be punchier tho, nice man, like this!
     
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    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    best i heard from you so far, great tune. great drums they are really original.
     
  4. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers guys
    which element of the mixdown was wonkiest?lol
     
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    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    just needs careful tweeking, everything is pretty clear, except the midrange (eq a bit more), long-synth/pads are a little overpowering, and i recon u can get more sub in there, and more punch on the snare, a bit more sparkle in the top end too (10khz +3-6db shelf might do it, or maybe just on the hats/snare, see what works)
     
  6. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cool man ill av a go at that today

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    bump
     
  7. Catsel

    Catsel Well-Known Dismember

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    love it bra

    this new style u got is nice (y)

    maybe try it with one less beat. moar simplez. deep.
     
  8. Life1989

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    its really nice track, great atmosphere in it...
     
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    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers guys
     
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    i like the percussion man! grooving well with the track, i think miszt has a point about some parts of the mixdown tho..a bit of tweaking here and there will make it sound a lot crisper and neater..e.g at 1:32 when the new synth comes in, it sounds like its clashin a lil.
    other than that tho it sounds really pleasant..nice tune mate.
     
  11. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers mate ill see wat i can do
     
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    hyperd4eva H&M SCARVES

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    sounds great to the untrained ear. Id buy it!
     
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    miszt BASSFACE Royale

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    check ur eq between 180-400hz across all your sounds, i recon theres quite a few rez spikes u can take out that will really help clean the mix up, still lovin the vibes anyways! :D
     
  15. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers guys im still workin on the mixdown for this
    the version up was basicly just a draft of the idea if u get me
     
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    Yeah, liking this. Like the vocal. I agree, you need a little bit more sub low for the punchiness on the drop and maybe layer another snare for a bit more bite. Sounding good though, man. I'm following ya (-EVADE-). Love your profile pic also haha!
     
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    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    Realy feeling this mate but i think u have too much reverb on your instruments in the intro... your drums and sub sound fine to me, possibly a tad (just a tad) more umph on the sub! but thats all. Good work man :)
     
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