MARLOK - FIND YOU

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MARKLAR, Sep 28, 2011.

  1. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

    Joined:
    Oct 1, 2006
    Messages:
    15,034
    Likes Received:
    650
    new thing kinda dark i guess
    still work in progress
    all feedback is good cheers


    new version
     
    Last edited: Oct 1, 2011
  2. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

    Joined:
    Aug 6, 2009
    Messages:
    3,971
    Likes Received:
    227
    Location:
    Essex, England
    Liking the glitchy sounds in the intro, very C64 like.....

    Drums need alot of work mate if im honest, snare sounds really weak, and muffled. And the kick doesnt have much thump. But as you pointed out it is still a WIP, so I guess you can figure all that stuff out later. Look forward to hearing the finished piece
     
  3. RUSSLA

    RUSSLA DNBF Monarch

    Joined:
    May 23, 2008
    Messages:
    6,264
    Likes Received:
    886
    Location:
    BH1
    Yeh it is your right :]
     
  4. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

    Joined:
    Oct 1, 2006
    Messages:
    15,034
    Likes Received:
    650
    cheers man can sort of see what you mean bout the snare but i kinda wanted it like that
    also the kick is thumping like a cunt on my end?lol
     
  5. luciduk

    luciduk Active Member

    Joined:
    Oct 25, 2009
    Messages:
    3,644
    Likes Received:
    5
    easy bro !! feeling it but i hav to say ur snare just needs to come up a good few dB and get compressed right so its a whipper snapper snare and then ul get my full approval
     
  6. Rezonate

    Rezonate Member

    Joined:
    Aug 31, 2011
    Messages:
    232
    Likes Received:
    0
    This is some dark styles man! Intros cool, bass is filthy, i think the drums sound alright...at work at the minute so will have a listen on the monitors at home and give ya a bit more feedback. The track for me gets a bit boring for my personal tastes althoughit is livened up a bit more with that old skool stab/synth that comes in later on in the track Maybe you could incorporate a few single hits of this earlier in the track? May be some fast hats or a ride cymbal would liven the high end up a bit more give it a bit more energy after that break at about 1.09.
     
  7. Phat_Sam

    Phat_Sam Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Oct 17, 2008
    Messages:
    3,122
    Likes Received:
    235
    Location:
    The Cupboard Under The Stairs
    Drums seem to have FAR too much presence over the bassline in my opiniiiiion.

    Could be seriously grotty if you sorted out the mix.

    I think the kick and snare are FAR too punchy at the mo. They take it away from everything else tm. You'd be better off with a kinda... "Northern Lights" kinda drum sound?

    Big tho mate. Could be a banger!
     
  8. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

    Joined:
    Oct 1, 2006
    Messages:
    15,034
    Likes Received:
    650
    cheers guys
    ive been reworkin the drums abit now got a bit of a different sound but same structure will try out some extra hats an rides etc aswell
     
  9. Lucider

    Lucider Member

    Joined:
    Sep 23, 2011
    Messages:
    193
    Likes Received:
    1
    Location:
    San Francisco, CA
    I love the kick and snare, try not to lose their character as you bring them out more!

    "kinda dark", lol

    Glitch and breakbeats at the ends of phrase would be pretty tight, but I'll say that about every song. I like the groove around 2:00. It'll be nice to hear that once it's bigger.

    I really like some of the releases by N.Phect, Rawtekk, and Mofi - this reminds me of that a little. Theirs is a bit crunchier than yours...
     
  10. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

    Joined:
    Feb 2, 2009
    Messages:
    3,087
    Likes Received:
    94
    Location:
    NZ
    The intro is really cool, would be nice to hear a more experimental beat drop after that instead of the standard. Cool vibes tho, lets hear the finished thing then.
     
  11. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

    Joined:
    Sep 13, 2010
    Messages:
    5,159
    Likes Received:
    1,417
    I enjoy those growels.
     
  12. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

    Joined:
    Oct 1, 2006
    Messages:
    15,034
    Likes Received:
    650
    cheers guys
    new version is up
     
  13. Catsel

    Catsel Well-Known Dismember

    Joined:
    Jan 3, 2008
    Messages:
    16,325
    Likes Received:
    2,085
    SIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK
     
  14. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

    Joined:
    Oct 1, 2006
    Messages:
    15,034
    Likes Received:
    650