MARLOK - CUT HIS HEAD OFF (NEW VERSION)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MARKLAR, Sep 18, 2010.

  1. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    decided to make a new thread
    made a fair few changes an theres a dubstep breakdown
    feedback is very appreciated
    cheers
     
  2. Krispy

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    Sounds great
    You should make the hi hats more shufflley or change the pattern in the dubstep portion me thinks
     
  3. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    yea that sounds like a plan actually
    cheers for checkin
     
  4. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Quite like that one. Like the bass.
    Bass could be louder.
    Cool vocal sample
    Really like the idea of the dubstep bit. You could build up (down?) to that a bit more and there's room to really change things up there, really make it more different from the main part.

    Nice tune.
     
  5. Jwood27

    Jwood27 VICTIM

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    really like the dubstep breakdown like others have said, adds some nice variety
    overall i like this a lot
     
  6. Freek

    Freek Lets get freeeeeeky

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    like the tune man, sounds like the reverby effects in the main drop are too loud they give the whole tune a bit too much reverb, bring them down into the mix and ull be laughin. i like the dubstep break in the middle. really good tune lemme no when its finished. saafffeeee
     
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    yep i was expecting a much bigger drop, the buildup was so promising but had too much energy in my opinion, so the drop didn't stand out too much.

    Dubstep part was well interesting. Nicely done. The snare sounded a little too reverbish to me as well.

    Good luck finishing this one!
     
  8. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers guys
     
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    i tend to agree with freek ^^^. get the mixdown nice and clean, maybe mix up a bit more during the breakdown as already been said, and youre fine.

    good work. youre constantly improving atm. looking forward to more tunes, hehe ;)
     
  11. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers mate!
     
  12. Thin and crispy

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    Might just be me but i think its lacking a little sub? other than that its wicked!!! im not a big fan of dubstep breakdowns, its not to my taste BUT i think you've realy done a good job at it.