MARLOK - CLASSICAL RAGGA [JUMP UP]

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MARKLAR, Oct 4, 2011.

  1. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    made this today for a bit of fun
    still work in progress
    all feedback is good
    cheers
     
    Last edited: Oct 6, 2011
  2. Rezonate

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    Broken link marlok.....will have a listen when fixed
     
  3. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    new link up
     
  4. underspawn

    underspawn Headz Roll

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    Didn't expect strings to sound so good on this kinda tune, great job
     
  5. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers mate
     
  6. Rezonate

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    Strings are great really good melody. Automation and variation sounds good on the bass just don't particularly like the sound too much can't quite describe what i would change in it though! Nicely put together track though man good work :)
     
  7. MARKLAR

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    cheers for checkin mate
     
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    That bit at 3:21 where you take out the strings, I'd put that at 1:07 as well and leave it until that little wah lead at 1:30 then bring the strings back in there.

    But that's just cos i reckon that bit is hench and I wanted more! Love that bass.
     
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    Liking this. I bet those strings could be made more epic tho.
     
  10. Phat_Sam

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    Strings soundin NICE!

    Bass is a bit... dunno... too scratchy? Definitely not loud enough.

    Drums sounding nice though!

    Potential to be HUUUUGE!
     
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  12. IV4

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    The whole track drives along great. But there is something wrong with the bass. All together the track is bad ass.
     
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    as Phat Sam says "Potential to be HUUUUGE!" just needs the extra oomph on the bass :D
     
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    awesome shit main
     
  15. Thin and crispy

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    Lyrics aren't to personal taste but i think lyrics fit it if u get what i mean. sounding phat tho man, just pump that bass up a notch.

    ---------- Post added at 17:21 ---------- Previous post was at 17:19 ----------

    i'd also slap some echo on the vocal for when it drops out, make it sound a bit more fluent rather than just ending abruptly
     
  16. oversight

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    liking this! string and vocals are big

    bass, if im honest might sound better if it was a bit more melodic if that makes sence? more classic jump up where as this is kind of... almost neuro... also the snare and kick sound good, but the cymbals/ hats could do with a bit of work to get a bit more groove? i dunno im nit picking, its a cool tune
     
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    cheers guys
    what is it thats wrong with the bass is it the tones or the level or ??
     
  18. Thin and crispy

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    touch more sub, level
     
  19. MARKLAR

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    will give that a go cheers