Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MARKLAR, Oct 4, 2011.
made this today for a bit of fun
still work in progress
all feedback is good
Broken link marlok.....will have a listen when fixed
new link up
Didn't expect strings to sound so good on this kinda tune, great job
Strings are great really good melody. Automation and variation sounds good on the bass just don't particularly like the sound too much can't quite describe what i would change in it though! Nicely put together track though man good work
cheers for checkin mate
That bit at 3:21 where you take out the strings, I'd put that at 1:07 as well and leave it until that little wah lead at 1:30 then bring the strings back in there.
But that's just cos i reckon that bit is hench and I wanted more! Love that bass.
Liking this. I bet those strings could be made more epic tho.
Strings soundin NICE!
Bass is a bit... dunno... too scratchy? Definitely not loud enough.
Drums sounding nice though!
Potential to be HUUUUGE!
The whole track drives along great. But there is something wrong with the bass. All together the track is bad ass.
as Phat Sam says "Potential to be HUUUUGE!" just needs the extra oomph on the bass
awesome shit main
Lyrics aren't to personal taste but i think lyrics fit it if u get what i mean. sounding phat tho man, just pump that bass up a notch.
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i'd also slap some echo on the vocal for when it drops out, make it sound a bit more fluent rather than just ending abruptly
liking this! string and vocals are big
bass, if im honest might sound better if it was a bit more melodic if that makes sence? more classic jump up where as this is kind of... almost neuro... also the snare and kick sound good, but the cymbals/ hats could do with a bit of work to get a bit more groove? i dunno im nit picking, its a cool tune
what is it thats wrong with the bass is it the tones or the level or ??
touch more sub, level
will give that a go cheers
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