MARLOK - ALONE version2

[MARKLAR]

seem to be having a bit of a block so decided to have a go reworking a tune
think its sounds better now

all feedback is good
cheers

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fmarlok%2Fmarlok-alone-v2

this is the original version

 

[IV4]

You wright pretty songs very well. On my end the song sound great. I am enjoying the glitch drums that are evolving as the song progresses. Very nice song.
Do you want to post up the original so we can compare and contrast the touch ups?

 

[DeeGun]

Lovely tune imo.

 

[MARKLAR]

cheers guys
ive edited first post with original version

 

[subprime]

As usual, a great listen. Super soundtrack material.

 

[fractal]

nice, very vibey man

 

[MARKLAR]

cheers

 

[lostnthesound]

Definitely sounds much better IMO. What I can appreciate about this tune is there is always something being added/changed every 16 or so, which I feel is essential is carrying a tune like this from beginning to end. I think it's a strong, intelligent tune.

 

[neddez]

yeah man this is really solid stuff

the arrangement is ON POINT

there were a few sounds that sounded a bit too resonant and stuff but thats just picking nits mix-wise

inspiring stuff though

 

[MARKLAR]

cheers people

 

[Ritual]

i remember when you posted the original, good edit.

big love for this.

 

[MARKLAR]

cheers mate

 

[MARKLAR]

bump

 

[Rezenate]

Great mood and feel and bass has a good presence yet subtle. If im going to be picky then id say that the kick drum has slightly got that ball bounce type sound.

Good track!