MARLOK - ALONE version2

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MARKLAR, May 22, 2012.

  1. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    seem to be having a bit of a block so decided to have a go reworking a tune
    think its sounds better now

    all feedback is good
    cheers



    this is the original version

     
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  2. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    You wright pretty songs very well. On my end the song sound great. I am enjoying the glitch drums that are evolving as the song progresses. Very nice song.
    Do you want to post up the original so we can compare and contrast the touch ups?
     
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    DeeGun Church of Krust

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    Lovely tune imo.
     
  4. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers guys
    ive edited first post with original version
     
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    As usual, a great listen. Super soundtrack material.
     
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    nice, very vibey man
     
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    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    lostnthesound Burns Easily in the Sun

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    Definitely sounds much better IMO. What I can appreciate about this tune is there is always something being added/changed every 16 or so, which I feel is essential is carrying a tune like this from beginning to end. I think it's a strong, intelligent tune.
     
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    yeah man this is really solid stuff

    the arrangement is ON POINT

    there were a few sounds that sounded a bit too resonant and stuff but thats just picking nits mix-wise

    inspiring stuff though
     
  10. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers people
     
  11. Ritual

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    i remember when you posted the original, good edit.

    big love for this.

    :)
     
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    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    Great mood and feel and bass has a good presence yet subtle. If im going to be picky then id say that the kick drum has slightly got that ball bounce type sound.

    Good track!