Ive listened through a few times and your selection is perfect, some great tunes in there i have not heard before. As you said there are a few points which weren't as tight but overall it was a good mix and a lot of the mixes worked really well, for instance
fade away >> underpass and then next wix was smooth too. Even If >> Alluviom was one of the best mixes, two great tracks. I also thought save me >> painted smile was sick but you cut out save me quite suddenly when it went out of time. Spliff's comment about the phrases being a bit out at times is a good point, its not a big problem at all, just bear in mind that tracks like mr. majestik have irregular length intros. definately looking forward to your next mix!