Marble Void- Ghoulardi

[eloy santiago]

this ones built around a Loop from an old, obscure Hardrock song- Cleveland, Ohio by Granicus- and kind of developed from there..

 

[WhoSayReload?]

this ones built around a Loop from an old, obscure Hardrock song- Cleveland, Ohio by Granicus- and kind of developed from there..

I think it needs a more clearly defined structure, I'd advise finding some professional artists or tracks that you like and throwing those mp3's into your daw and studying their structure.