As IV4 said some time ago, it quite hard to give feedback on your tracks, since they are different
But I'll do my very best!
maybe give your kick a bit more low end? So when the bass hasn't kicked in, you have some sort of bass
I would personally turn down the hat/cymbal/whatisit right before the rim a bit, so the rim has a bit more impact
You can also try to give that initial sound in 'the drop' some sub/bass, I don't know if it would fit, but now, in my head it might fit
Its a clap layered with a snare pitched up lol yeah mabye overbearing isnt it... Hard for me too tell how this sounds sub wise as ive not got access to my monitors just now and using headphones. Im listening to the bounced version and raw version in ableton it seems to have lost low end after bounce. Ive got few ideas for this one anyway thanks for feedback.