MALCONE - Brownvelvet

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by malcone, Feb 17, 2004.

  1. malcone

    malcone New Member

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    Hi,
    I post a part of a new tune! :cool:

    Brownvelvet

    give me comments!!! :p
     
  2. freeagent

    freeagent Almost 30

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    Needs a hook, that three note rave riff isn't gonna make people remember your tune. Change up the break some, it is very repetitive. Very dark and minimal.