needs a lot of work imo, regarding mixdown and drums mainly, and the bass is not bad, but could use a little bit finetuning aswell, try to distort the mids and hi-end maybe.
like your use of samples and arrangement, youre on the right track!
Yeah it needs to be normalized but I was in a bit of a rush to upp it. Thanks for the comments, I know what you mean about polishing & mixdowns - thats the hardest part for me - getting the finishing touches to a track so it sounds 'clean'.