Madknob - Nightmare [Drum&Bass]

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  1. madknob

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    New track. Hope u enjoy and any Feedback is welcome.

    Cheers!
     
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  2. IV4

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    I think it is really nice but that weird wobble lead sounds out of loud. I think you should try taking it out and/or turning it down. Other than that you have a beautiful track.
     
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  3. smoothassilk

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    Yeah what he said.
    IMO, would sound better with a less agressive lead with a lot less sustain and more decay or release.
    Otherwise good track, good vibes
     
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  4. pano9000

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    IMHO the wobble sound fits into the track, but as mentioned above, it needs to be turned down a bit, it's too loud at the moment :)
    I also like the vibe the sounds in the background create.
    Other than that: The Drum arrangement sounds nice, but I somehow think the Kick is missing some low-end.
    regarding the song arrangement: I don't know if it's finished or not, but the intro is a bit too short for my taste. 1 single phrase before the first break comes in, IMHO is *very* short. (from a DJ perspective)

    other than that: Nice work!
     
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    I can never be thankful enough for all of this feedback. Got some priceless opinions. Thanks mates! :)
     
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    And still anybody can comment. :)
     
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    I can't say much more than things already said..
    The wobble is indeed a bit to loud and the kick needs indeed some low end. The snare now seems quiet, but i think that will be fixed when the wobble is turned down.
    The transition to the breakdown was way to harsh. Atleast get a with noise rise there or something... Actually, with no intention to offend, I think you need to work on the transitions in general, they sound a bit too weak or easy
     
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  8. madknob

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    Thanks mate!
     
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    everything is nice except "bwa bwa bwa" synth)
     
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    Sad that u don't like it, but thanks anyway :)