Made another tune, feedback?

[mr meh]

Think this is better than that tune i posted the other day, any comments welcome

https://soundcloud.com/kroppah%2Fcities-afraid-320

 

[subprime]

The drumstep bit has a nice feel to it, jungly amen drums

 

[cptunicorn]

yeah, recognized the watchmen quote straight away! im definately digging the build up before the first drop. sounds sick till now, although in my opinion the snare is a bit too loud/in the face.

 

[mr meh]

thanks for the feedback fellas

probably gonna re-write this one as a drumstep tune at some point, not feeling the fast part anymore

 

[oversight]

intro is very effective, building up nicely
i think the mixdown needs a bit of work, snare seems a bit loud, bass is a bit muddy, just little tweaks really