LyRyck - Universe (WIP)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by risakczex, Jan 5, 2014.

  1. risakczex

    risakczex Member

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    Hi guys :)
    its a long time i didnt have posted any song to this forum but i am back :D
    i have trying and upgrading myself in music
    i have done really many attemps and i always trying making music i am not dead
    but in this one i noticed it has big potential in melody, bass, atmo etc...

    tell me what do you think guys about it :p
    some feedback please
    thanks LyRyck :)
     
  2. smoothassilk

    smoothassilk Active Member

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    Nice... pure uplifting clubby stuff.
    I think the lead melody at 0.56 needs to come through a bit more. It could be a volume issue, it could be the fact that it's getting drowned in the chords/noise or it could be the fact that it's not a sound that penetrates well in the first place. A sharper attack wouldn't go amiss either.
    Otherwise, nothing more to say apart from make it longer.
     
  3. risakczex

    risakczex Member

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    haha thanks man :)
    i work on it and now that melody from 0:56 is louder than before and its layered with many stuffs of synths
    but little bit i am trying to change chords
    i want it smooth and sounds like train ride his track :D
    soon there could be free, full version :3 :)

    LyRyck :)
     
  4. JoErOe

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    Nice jump up feel! I do agree that the lead should stand out just a tad more. but i like the progression here. really good vibes. would go well with some vocals
    Check my latest track if you get some time! follow if you like!