LyRyck - Space dreams(WIP)

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  1. risakczex

    risakczex Member

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    Hi guys :)
    Today i released WIP version of my new song, that i am working on :p
    Please comment it, rate it, tell me what do you think about it :)

    Here it is:


    Hope you enjoy :p
    LyRyck :)
     
  2. Fatkidscantjump

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    i think it sounds good but it lacks of some kind of a hook, like a melodic hook.
    it just feels that you could add much more elements to make it more interesting, but i would say its a good start
     
  3. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Not bad, but sounds too happy for me.
     
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    well... what an awesome tune!!! can´t spot any criticism! I´m really looking forward to hear the finished track :D
     
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    Sounding good man. things I could critique though would be the snare. I used to do the same thing but the release on it is too much and splashes over everything else (if that makes any sense). Tighten it up by shortening the sample and see if that helps. It will appear more snappy that splashy :)
     
  6. risakczex

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    I will add melodies, maybe i will change octave or notes dont care. :)
    Yes thats start, i just wanted just to show effects...
    and i will complete, this track in next week ... i will work on it everyday. :)
    Thanks :)

    Yea ... for me too ... its hard to compose, neutral chords but if you making neutral chords, its going to be dark or too happy. :/
    I dont know how to play on piano ... I have midi keyboards, that helps me little, :) but i am still learning now its 1,5 year. :)
    Maybe i will change notes or octave to make it little neutral ...
    thank you for your opinion :))

    No critism ? :/ i like, when peoples tell me, what they think about my music... I think this is little bit happy. :)
    But thanks :)) i will complete it. Planning to release next week, if i will be done with it :)
     
  7. Mr_DnB

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    well... what an awesome tune!!! can´t spot any criticism! I´m really looking forward to hear the finished track