LyRyck - Cloud (WIP v2)

[risakczex]

Hi there is LyRyck i am just here to release my WIP version 2 of my new track called Cloud
Guys please tell me what do you think about it
i am planning to release this when holidays will end so 2.9.2013
here is preview:

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fryky-hamrozi%2Fcloud-wip-v2

give some feedback please
hope you like it
Thanks LyRyck

 

[hughhardiemusic]

super punchy production, synths are programmed well. the bass could do with some thickening up, is it just a subbass at the moment? layering up a wider bass sound with some chorus on it could work

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fhugh-hardie%2Fhugh-hardie-tearing-me-apart

 

[LVB]

proper dancefloor liquid! agree with hugh on the bass, tight production!

 

[risakczex]

super punchy production, synths are programmed well. the bass could do with some thickening up, is it just a subbass at the moment? layering up a wider bass sound with some chorus on it could work

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fhugh-hardie%2Fhugh-hardie-tearing-me-apart

Thank you yes it's just subbass but i think it fills space very well and it doesn't needs any more
now i am trying to finish this song it gave me a lot of work composing this song ...

 

[past_tense]

nice track! keep that energy and it will be fine will download for jogging as soon as you finish it

 

[risakczex]

nice track! keep that energy and it will be fine will download for jogging as soon as you finish it

Thanks i am keeping it i want to do more variations changes etc... will be done soon ... i want to try to get this on liquicity but dont know how ://

 

[past_tense]

Just finish the track, add some variations as you said etc. and drop your tune at the link below for them. It has a high chance to go through IMO.

http://soundcloud.com/liquicityrecords/dropbox/profile