LyRyck - Another (WIP)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by risakczex, Feb 24, 2014.

  1. risakczex

    risakczex Member

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    hi guys :)
    today i just want to show you my new style and what i have made in 3 days :3



    comment & rate
    tell me what you like and what no :)
    what to improve :3

    thanks
    LyRyck :)
     
  2. Huraqan

    Huraqan New Member

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    Not bad!
    Personally I'm not a big fan of the j-pop style synth ^^ but it goes nicely with the track.
    It does get a bit repetitive after the first minute.
    So maybe you could make a variation of the melody, or use a different synth starting at 1:08...
    Oh and maybe a bit more sub.
     
  3. risakczex

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    thanks :)
    lol i didnt know that its a style synth i just made it in massive how good sounds it for me :)
    yep i know i am trying to change chords making variations and change arrangement add little effects and make it smooth
    ok in next preview there will be more sub :)

    thanks for tips

    LyRyck
     
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    Huraqan New Member

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    Cool, I'll check it out when it's done.
    Hehe, it's not necessarily a j-pop synth, it's just not my type of sound :p