LyRyck - Another (WIP)

[risakczex]

hi guys
today i just want to show you my new style and what i have made in 3 days :3



comment & rate
tell me what you like and what no
what to improve :3

thanks
LyRyck

 

[Huraqan]

Not bad!
Personally I'm not a big fan of the j-pop style synth ^^ but it goes nicely with the track.
It does get a bit repetitive after the first minute.
So maybe you could make a variation of the melody, or use a different synth starting at 1:08...
Oh and maybe a bit more sub.

 

[risakczex]

thanks
lol i didnt know that its a style synth i just made it in massive how good sounds it for me
yep i know i am trying to change chords making variations and change arrangement add little effects and make it smooth
ok in next preview there will be more sub

thanks for tips

LyRyck

 

[Huraqan]

Cool, I'll check it out when it's done.
Hehe, it's not necessarily a j-pop synth, it's just not my type of sound