Definitely a great idea! But just a few things that got my attention: Personally, there are too much effects on the vocal (awesome vocal though!) Wicked intro, the electronic soundthing is cool The last part to the buildup was a bit weird, I felt it was a bit awkward The main bass could use a bit of beefing up, not necessarily distortion, but a it should be a bit bigger.
Nice job, good modern jungle feel. I didn't personally dig the lyric intro that much... if I was to keep the lyrics I'd probably hi pass them and put some distortion or effects on them. I did like the little build up to the next section - jungle fashion maintained flow. Like it a lot..
