Lotus (Dark/Atmospheric)

[equilibrium]

UPDATED: Illusion (Dark/Atmospheric)

Updated

https://soundcloud.com/robertjulius%2Fillusion

Changed the drums and added some stuff

Not a full tune

 

[IV4]

That woomp part is cool. Drums are tight. Piano needs a change. You could use a sub. I think you should try and remake another song with this. Use those woomps to carry the rhythm. But don't use the same one voer again. Change up the lfo or envelope settings to make it interesting. Post results.

 

[endless_limits]

That woomp part is cool. Drums are tight. Piano needs a change. You could use a sub. I think you should try and remake another song with this. Use those woomps to carry the rhythm. But don't use the same one voer again. Change up the lfo or envelope settings to make it interesting. Post results.

couldnt have said it better myself would like to see this worked on abit more

 

[ExplodingMan]

Yeah, i feel like this tunes needs more variety, its just a loop really in my opinion, not a full tune, maybe add some bass or a few gaps in the track, switch the drums up a bit? i dunno something to keep the listener engaged is needed i think. peace.